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Details
Market May 29, 2019    Sold May 29, 2019
Producer Shawn Levy, Dan Levine, Adam Rodin
Agent David Boxerbaum, Parker Davis (Verve)
Manager Adam Rodin (Old Soul Entertainment)
Production 21 Laps
Studio Universal Pictures
5-29-2019 - Per Deadline, Universal paid high to mid six figures. Gaffney was previously repped by UTA but is now repped by Verve. This occurred during the ATA-WGA standoff and was the first spec sale since Verve signed the WGA code of conduct.
Loglines
A Suspensful Monster Movie.
A struggling alcoholic isolates himself on his late uncle’s remote island but must survive the adaptable monster that lurks within the water.
Format
Genres
Thriller, Black Comedy, Horror, Addiction, Alcohol, Alcoholism, Boat/Ship, Creature, Dramedy, Escape, Film, Gory, Monster, Survival, Suspenseful, Violence/Violent
Pages
104
Rated
PG-13
Budget
High
Lead
M Unspecified 35 Average
Similar
"The Thing," "The Monster," "Underwater"
When
Present, spans about six weeks.
Where
85% in and around a decaying cabin on an island and the surrounding lake. Additional locations include a tent, a rehab center, a Subaru, an apartment, a street, a holding cell, a country road, a grocery store, a dormitory bedroom, a recreation room, and a bar.

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Synopsis
A WOMAN and a MAN backpacker (Adults) face off against a wolf before the woman falls into a lake. An unseen creature eats the wolf, and then the backpackers. ATHENA (Adult) picks up her brother HENRY (30s) from rehab. She tells him that their uncle PAT (Adult), who has been missing for two years, was officially declared dead. HENRY calls his ex, MARIA (Adult), but throws the phone away before she answers. He goes to a bar, relapsing. Athena takes Henry to the decrepit cabin on Pat’s island to isolate him from alcohol. She leaves, promising to return in six weeks. Over the next five weeks, Henry improves the house and himself. He takes a canoe out on the lake, hoping to call Maria, but there is no signal. One night, Henry senses something disturbing the house. He finds a snake skin-like fabric in his bathtub. The next morning, Henry sees a splotch of red on the lake. Henry goes to it and finds he has signal. He talks to Maria, but the signal cuts out. A wave arises from the lake, flipping his canoe. He starts to drown and sees the wreck of a “US Army Chemical Corps” plane...
Reader 1 Comments
OVERALL (CONSIDER)
While isolating himself on a remote island to escape his alcoholism, a man must survive shapeshifting monster from the surrounding lake. Henry is a sympathetic but flawed protagonist who overcomes his alcoholism, a monster in its own right, to defeat the literal monster. Henry’s alcoholism, which is his internal conflict, gives rise to the external conflict on the monster, and in order to have the tools he needs to survive, Henry must resist drinking the alcohol he finds. While the external conflict escalates well, the internal conflict has less potential to develop, and could benefit from being emphasized a bit more. Solving a few logical questions, like when the monster attacks when it does and how Henry fights with the injuries he sustains, could further strengthen conflict. The concept of the monster is clever and visually-appealing. Events are well-paced, with frequent surprises and suspenseful sequences generating tension. The tone strikes a tricky but effective balance between treating its issues of addiction and survival seriously while also offering a darkly comic sensibility....