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Details
Market February 25, 2015
Agent Kathleen Remington, Will Watkins (ICM)
Manager Micah Klatzker, Stephen Crawford (Industry)
Loglines
Kept under wraps, but is being pitched as a futuristic Fast and Furious.
Set in 2044 Los Angeles where driving is illegal and automotive cars handle daily transportation. However, a former racer is hired by the police to stop a heist team that knows how to shutdown the entire city’s transportation system.
Format
Genres
Action, Sci-fi, Crime, Chase, Film, Heist, Organized Crime, Police, Racing
Pages
119
Rated
PG-13
Budget
Ultra High
Lead
M White 50 Attractive
Similar
Fast and the Furious Minority Report
When
Opening scene takes place 20 years before the events of the main narrative. The rest is around a week. Then last scene takes place 7 years later
Where
75% are in LA city streets, warehouses, police stations, police garages, garages, auto shop, inside cars, car cemetery, desert highway, traffic control center, conference room, warehouses. 25% are in homes, rooftops, inside bot cars, shower, bedroom.

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Synopsis
AUSTIN (28), a young passionate driver, races a black car. He describes in a voice over that he was lucky to have it all, but right when he believes he is going to win first place against the black car, last minute it takes the lead. Austin is disgusted with himself. Even more so when he discovers that the car he was racing was a self-driving car. Present day Los Angeles 2044, driving is illegal, autonomous car are the norm. They are controlled by the government to keep everyone safe. LINDA (28), prepares her gear for the heist she performs with VINCE DARIO (40’s), ROBERT (30) and DEREK (32). They work as a perfect team as Robert shuts down the city’s transportation system. Every single bot that transports people freezes and the entrie system is down. This buys the team time to steal money and rely on Linda’s incredible driving ability to escape the police with ease. WITGROWE (40’s) frustrated but awe at her skills. Witgrowe visits AUSTIN (50’s), who runs his black market business of selling automatic vehicles. He tells him he needs a driver, Austine feigns interest, but his passion for cars is apparent by the look of...
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Overall (RECOMMEND)
In 2044 Los Angeles, self-driving cars are the norm as regular driving is illegal. However, the police hire a former race car driver to help hunt down a heist team with their own specialized driver and worse they know how to shut down the city’s transportation system completely. The premise is interesting as tension and conflict can be built directly from the core concept. It also lays the foundation for interesting character decisions as Austin finally has the chance to drive again, while saving his daughter first from Dario’s dangerous team. Characters are good as Austin takes an active approach to save Linda, which is his clear goal. Dario, the villain, is great as his motivations are clear and he keeps Austin and Witgrowe since it feels he is always a few steps ahead of them. However, Austin does not have a clear character arc nor a weakness, or fear that he needs to address. From the beginning, Austin knows he was not a great father so he wants to make things right by saving her. He does not change from the beginning to the end. Linda’s goal is also not clear until the last third. There are some good dialogue moments that are funny and helps distinguish characters from one another. However, some dialogue can be on the nose or feel a little too outright. Structure is a major strength as beats do not feel missing or misplaced. They all function to create one cohesive narrative that steadily increasing the stakes and develops important character beats. Craft is good as there are little to no grammar or formatting errors. Scene descriptions are written concisely yet vividly paint the futuristic atmosphere....